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I'm tired.
Tired of feeling lost, afraid, misunderstood.
Tired of wondering if I'm letting someone down by the choices I've made.
I'm tired.
Tired of getting my feelings hurt, my ego bruised, my heart broken.
Tired of showing these varmin called emotions.
I'm tired.
Tired of being me, of being weak.
Tired of trying to be this person I cannot see.
I'm tired.
Tired of all the pain, all the struggle I've put upon myself.
Tired of not being the person I was.
I'm tired.
Tired of hiding, hoping, and healing.
Tired of listening, learning...letting.
I'm tired...I'm tired.
Sometimes I just get tired of it all.
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jeeringdrip Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014
It's like you've read my mind.. 
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chikinwang Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013

It's been awhile since I've done anything on this site, but it was quite the pleasant surprise to see how many people have liked and commented on this poem...

 

I cannot convey how absolutely amazing it is to have written something that has touched so many people. Thank you all for reading and relating to my work.

 

LOVE TO YOU ALL!

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Terrafirma16 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
I feel the same. Don't let it win.
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francelle Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
...seems like you have seen what was inside of me and wrote it perfectly in words...
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WhipCreamCookie Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ugh *faves this*
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AkatsukisFallenAngel Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
this is soo true great job! :clap:
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O-Mara Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
i just read this and ha a wowwww moment, i had thought i was the only one who felt like this ssometimes. ur work is very touching i thought u migant no =)
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Mystical-27 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011   Writer
Appreciation... ^_^
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SueyZaid Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011
speech outta my soul
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blargpersonO-O Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Well put. Exactly how I feel.
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RhodeFoster Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I know how you feel.
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WFPR Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
The second line of the poem o.0 I remember saying that one night in my midnight rantings. D8 Strange.
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Tempstrife Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2010
one could always try sleeping and not waking up
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kittycat914 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010
wow......i feel this some times.....lost.......unwanted.......BUT THEN A VOICE IN MY HEAD SAYS STOP MOPING AROUND AND GET UP OFF YOUR BUTT XD
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ginnyssecret Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010
thankyou
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Orphen92 Featured By Owner May 17, 2010   Writer
Dito......*tears*
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musicaddict96 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
i love this little poem.

its so good, and it reminds me of myself.
and its really just...true...sometimes you do get tired of everything in the world and wish you could just let it go, and just be carefree about everything...but of course, the world is a cruel place and doesnt do that oh so very often...-.-
it is very well written though, i like it
nice work :D
:heart:
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NazoReturns Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2010
I can relate to this. Awesome poem.
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chikinwang Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2010
Thank you so much for the compliment and the fave. :) I'm so glad that I've written something that so many people can relate to.

Thanks again. :)
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anjelleshadow Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
I can relate. I always feel like that but can't seem to put it into words. It's a great poem, be proud.
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chikinwang Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010
Thank you very much. I appreciate the compliment. :)
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anjelleshadow Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
you're welcome!! ^.^
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kathofalltrades Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
wow this is good the way you've written it is so true to the feeling... i think everyone feels like this sometimes... ty
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naiveminds Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
this perfectly describes how i feel right now
thank you for putting it into words
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FieryShadowz Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Who doesn't get tired of it all sometimes...
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laughingbomb Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My god.. i was so tired of not finding any one that could understand my feelings..
and i am way to tired to draw and write right now, so i searched for something another person could have made..
and here it is <3 thank you
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the-shadow-of-a-demo Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2008  Student General Artist
nice
thats how i feel these days
tired about feeling alone
of people only talking
to me when i am really sad
tired emotionally and tired
of living my life like that
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juliet-vampiette Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2008
This is put across very well. I almost feel the 'tired' from reading it. I like the way you have structured it with the long winded sentences to add to the feeling.
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avatard44 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2008
i love your sig! XD
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juliet-vampiette Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2008
Thank you :) I like yours too. What are the quotes from?
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avatard44 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2008
avatar the last airbender
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Captain-Savvy Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I identify with this completely. I'm tired, physically, emotionally, creativly. Just tired of living.
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sabrinapsycho12 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2008
very nice
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marzipanorsomething Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2007
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this is depressing. of course i like depressing, so this is very good.

do you need me to kill someone? 'cause ya know, i am a crazy ass white girl.

no, i don't see a certain someone being pointed out, so i guess that my services aren't needed. sigh.

but i'm sorry that you're tired. remember when we said that we would just stop thinking? just stop thinking about everything altogether? do it.
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chikinwang Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2007
Thanks a lot for reading this. I didn't think anyone would notice it being here since I don't get on here that mich anymore. I'm glad that you enjoyed it, though. :)

~Angela
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arizonangel Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2007
I can very easily relate to this. It doesn't seem to matter what you do, you always feel like you've failed. And, after awhile it does get old and you do get tired. Thanks so much for sharing this. :altermind:
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